The Player – Chapter 9 Goodbyes – Uncut Version by Author Ricci

Author’s Note: DEDICATED TO MS. NAUGHTY & NICE – SARA
Ayan, dedicated daw sa akin. Hihihihi ^_^ Thanks Ricci!

 

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I, SaraSidle, do not own this story. Credit to Ricci. ^_^

 

 

 

 

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36 Responses to The Player – Chapter 9 Goodbyes – Uncut Version by Author Ricci

  1. paupau14 says:

    uuugh!! mas lalong uminit sa kwarto ko ah..

  2. isra says:

    THANK YOU!!!!!!!

  3. Ricci says:

    Yohooo Ms. Naughty & Nice, thanks for the space. At kinabahan ako bigla…. Hahaha. Yong wholesome sa EB, eh may kakaibang facet pala dito sa TNS.

    Oh my GEEE! (⌒-⌒; )

  4. Kat says:

    THANK YOU Ms Ricci ans Ms Sara! love it❤

  5. ang hidden emotion talaga pag ni let go. pak na pak!

  6. Cyn cynch says:

    Thank you for letting us see the unabridged more REALISTIC version…BRAVA!

  7. Ricci says:

    Chapter 12 has uncut but it’s very short – 69 words lang, hahaha.. kaya I’ve tentatively titled it as QUICKIE. Lol~

  8. Alpha says:

    Thanks Ms.Ricci & ms. Sara. As usual, fantastic. I think the cut part is relevant to the story of them so dapat lng na kasama talaga ito–more than the hotness, is the expression of Richrd’s love to Maya, w/o him realizing it or too late to realize.Naawa tuloy ako sa kanila–both of them are victims –for Richard, of his past circumstances kaya syaganyan & for Maya, who just truly, deeply loved Richard.

    • Ricci says:

      Hihihi… Mahirap nga lang ilagay yang expression na yan sa EB. The last time I saw it was in mrsacc Reunited part 8. Sandali lang in public eye. Ganun talaga, and we respect EB kaya we learn to cut. Hahahaha…

      Di ba ang BCWMH teleserye also do some cuts! Nyehehe… Yong uncut kaya eh nasa DVD?

      • Alpha says:

        Oh i so understand EB,no prob jan. I just remember u mentioned n one of ur replies that prang hindi na rin needed yung cut portion–that the story can stand na.hehe. But, super thank u talaga..QUICKIE wud be a captivating title for a 69-word next chap. Intriguing what ending ibibigay mo sa kanila..& even wondering ano susunod mong isusulat na fanfic😉

      • Ricci says:

        69 words challenge. Magandang idea yan pero lagot! Tiyak na mag aamok ang mga readers. I can now see the comments – ‘bitin, iksi, next please.’ Hahaha.

        Yong 69 words was actually the cut I’m supposed to do for chapter 12 for EB. Yong uncut dito sa
        TNS. Kaso when I read it again kanina, parang it needs more expression (word from
        you) so I’ve added na more words.

      • csizoe says:

        I agree with Alpha, specially when Richard said “I love you” to Maya, wala yun sa “cut” version in which I believe is an important scene.

        THanks Ricci for sharing us this wonderful story, pero BITIN NGA! NEXT PLEASE!

        HIhihii

  9. MzRayMaude says:

    thank you ms. ricci. great chapter as usual. haaaaaaaaaaay, can’t wait for the next chap…

  10. nanette says:

    hmmnnn… excited ka rin eh, akala ko hanggang chap 11 ka lang before you fly.
    the looks of it you’re gonna publish the whole series before you go…
    which is good for us readers, at least the agony of waiting will be short-lived…
    nice version, as always….
    napasmile naman ako sa title ng chapter 12, add to that the number of words you used – must be a compact chapter…
    way to go …..🙂

    • Ricci says:

      Thinking of a title pa ren for chapter 11 kaya di mai send. At nakalimutan ko pang i-copy yong mp3 that’s supposed to be embedded in the chapter.

      Chapter 11 Darling ~ ok ba title na to?

      Binilang ko talaga yong words sa chapter 12 — 69 talaga eh, but I think I will add more expressions para naman gumana imagination naten. Hahaha…

      • nanette says:

        ako pa talaga tinanong…. anyways, since it would be their first time to see each other after a year, so they must be “longing” to see or be with each other – see if longing or desire or yearning will fit sa storyline mo for this chapter… i do’t know, you know better…
        if its a term of endearment try mo charm…
        naku ricci you have better imagination… basta i’ll read all the next chapters..

  11. piaseohyun says:

    Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! Ahhhhhhhhhhhh! basangbasa na namn ako😀
    Thanks Ricci
    Thanks Sara

  12. RMR61 says:

    69 words? mahahabang words ba ito without space? LOL Maka pigtal hininga yan pag nagkataon🙂 Thanks for sharing!

    • Ricci says:

      Hahaha…. Si Prof Sara lang ang may kakayahan na gumawa nyan.

      Yohooo Prof. Ipakita ang abilidad sa mga avid fans mo on how to do it in 69 words. Hihihi.

      • csizoe says:

        In 69 words? Hmmmm

        Ano po ang meron sa 69? Hindi ko alam ang sinasabi ninyo.

        Alam ko sa PU meron akong nabasa dedicated kay RMR69, I mean 61 pala.

        Hihihi

      • Ricci says:

        Ay, ang hinihin… kahit na we’re in your territory… Hahaha.

      • csizoe says:

        Hahahaha

        ay wait

        hihihihi

        this world naman is our world, dito lang naman kasi tayo pwedeng maging mahinhin.

        Speaking of mahinhin, sabik (yes sabik talaga) na ako sa 69 words na yan ha..

        hihihi

  13. hanah6181 says:

    I love this uncut version. More than the “action” itself, I felt the intensity of their emotions. Hayyyy, love. You’ve done another marvelous job ms ricci. Thank you. I look forward to the next chapter.

  14. hanah6181 says:

    Btw, binasa ko ulit Kasi ang Ganda. Medyo naiyak ako. Ako Lang ba ang ganito ang reaction sa chapter na’to?

    • Ricci says:

      If you felt that way, then this writer is happy for I was able to convey the character’s emotions in writing. Flattered naman ako. Thanks.

  15. Nina says:

    Iba talaga pag uncut version yun babasahin.. Madadama mo talaga yun kwento dahil buo yun emotions. Kudos to Ricci for coming up with this kind of stories na swak sa TNS/EB. Thanks din Madam Sara naging outlet ang TNS ang ganito hihi

  16. rayter says:

    meron na po ba ung chap 12 na VERY SHORT…true prang nabitin ako sa chap 11 na end na..imagine 1 yeaR DI NAg kita tapos wala lang…ay ay di pwedi yan…hehehe protesta???

  17. rayter says:

    asan na po ung uncut ng chap 12 hahaha…naningil tlga di ba…promise nyo kc dun sa kabila eh hahaha

  18. cindylurky says:

    Hello. Just found this site and I just read the stories here. Where can I find the missing chapters for this story like this one. There is already chapters 3,5,7 and 9. Is there any chapters in between? Same goes with the other story here. Please let me know where can I find them. Thank you.

  19. cindylurky says:

    I had fun reading your works….great job!

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