Broken

I have been meaning to write angsty piece and Green, gave me an idea. So technically this is a response to a challenge from Green.

Don’t worry, I have 2 versions of this. ANGST and ROMANTIC. Angst muna.

WARNING: Super ANGST, you might cry. Again, if it is  too hot, get out immediately. Also, I apologize in advance and I want your feedback. ^_^

Scene: Happened after Maya broke up SC.

SC was driving home, angry at everything. He committed two traffic violations already, beating the red light” and “cutting”. He doesn’t care. Unfortunately there was no MMDA personnel on the site so he just continued driving.

“Ayokong masayang lahat ang pinaghirapan mo. Ayokong bumalik kayo sa dati…”

“Mas makakabuti para sa iyo at sa mga anak mong maghiwalay muna tayo.”

Her voice still echoed in his head.

SC: This is unacceptable! 

With that, he turned his car to a nearby bar.

For the first time in years, he will drink to ease the pain. He wanted to feel numb when he gets home.

SC: Jack and Coke, and keep it coming.

He said to the bartender.

5 shots later.

He decided to go back to her place.

SC: Unacceptable! After tonight, you will not say that. I will have you one way or another!

He drove back to Maya’s condo and went straight to her floor.

A loud banging was heard.

She opened the door.

Maya: O kala ko umuwi ka na? Ano ginagawa mo dito? Amoy alak ka? Uminom ka SC?!

SC: Let’s go to your room!

Maya: SC!? Bakit? Dito na lang. Ano ba yun?

SC: Let’s go to your room!

Maya: SC pwede bang kumalma ka, tinatakot mo ako eh.
 
He was getting impatient.
 
SC: Do I have to drag you to your room?
 
Maya: SC ano ba? Lasing ka na! Pwed..
 
He grabbed her and carried her to her bedroom. He locked the door.
 
He: I told you I am going to fix this. You can’t just let go of me that easily Maya. You just can’t! You don’t get to make me fall in love with you and leave. You can’t!
 
He pushed her on the bed, Maya was already scared, her hands trembling and too shocked she can’t even shout.
 
She was seeing a different person, as if possesed. His “tiger mode” seemed cute compare to what he was seeing now.
 
Maya: No SC, don’t do this.
 
SC: I don’t see any other way Maya.
 
Tears fell from his eyes.
 
SC: I….. I have to do this.
 
Maya: No! Lasing ka lang. Please!
 
She pleaded. Her face wet with tears.
 
He took off his pants and went on top of her.
 
She pushed her but he was  too strong.
 
Maya: SC! Please!
 
He tried to undressed her, in return she slapped, punched and kicked him, but it was no use. He was too strong for her limp body. Finally he ripped the last piece of her clothing, her panties.
 
He caught her arms and pinned it over her head while his other hand was already guiding his hardened manhood inside her.

She pleaded one last time, trying to stop the impending doom.

But him being drunk, angry, hurt and frustrated, no amount of pleading can stop him, even from her.

And then it happened.

It hurt. It bleed.

And suddenly she felt nothing. Numb.

The tears and pleading stopped, her eyes widened and  just stared at the ceiling and succumb to the darkness.

He had to adjust his pace because of her tightness. It was her first time afterall.

He: You are mine now. See? Easy fix.

She loves this man, but with what happened it will never be fixed, she thought.

Instead, he tore what was already broken. Cut it to even more smaller pieces.

He reached his climax screaming her name.

Sated, he rested on top of her and started caressing her.

SC: I love you.

He whispered.

She pushed him and turned her back at him. She covered herself with clothes she can grab and closed her eyes.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 
She woke up. Sweaty and heart pounding. It was only a dream.

Maya: Dios ko!

Determined, she said to herself,

Maya: Plan B. Stick with SC til the end. Akala ko… Whew! Kaloka!
 
 
 
 

 

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85 Responses to Broken

  1. fishkeeper03 says:

    Kung ako lang naman si Maya, when I woke up, ay gora break na na kung break may premyo pala eh! Hihi!

  2. paupau14 says:

    huuuuuuuuuh!! (iyak tone) bkit dream lng?! (chos!! anu ba nmn tong pinagiisip ko)

    anyways ouch if mgyri un..

  3. Cyn cynch says:

    Greabeeeeeee….buti na lang panaginip…coz no matter what the provocation, RAPE can not be justified…tsk tsk tsk ibang klase din ang wet dream ni Maya…MORE PLEASE…next time make the bed scene start similarly….with Richard hopping mad, (anger can be a great aphrodisiac after all) BUT still having thepresence of mind to seduce Maya😉

  4. Tammy Gutz says:

    alam nu ms. sara, i really wanted to meet u. naiintriga tlg ako sau. ang galing mo tlg. the best! ikaw na!

  5. precious says:

    i thought of rape, but then again, i can’t imagine SC raping Maya, so i thought it was just a dream and i was right…

    hihihi

    Ü

  6. iamyeyenG says:

    shucks!! ganyan pala siya pag lasing buti nlng at panaginip lng pala…wheew!! hindi ako umiyak sis kasi galit ako cz feel na feel ko na ang pain ni maya yun pala DREAM lng?? (wala lng affected much) LOL

  7. mhaihattori says:

    ah ah!i thought…………..buti na lang it was a dreammmm…bet ko rin makitang malasing si Sc..yun nga lang di pwede sa show…sis sara…di ka tao di ka hayop …eh ano ka?isa kang Genius hahaha…fanmode,lol

  8. Betchay says:

    Ms Sara tinakot mo naman ako si sc nang rape. Buti na lang it is a DREAM. Can not wait for the next one yong lasing din but may consent.

    • csizoe says:

      Originally it wasnt supposed to be a dream kaya lang hindi ko rin nakaya. Hindi pwede.

      Kaya, I felt relieve din, when I add the dream sequence.

      Sequence? Haha

      Hihihi

  9. RMR61 says:

    pag nagbabasa ako ng stories dito naka straight jacket na ko at may tapal pa bibig…kaya di agad ako nakakapag comment …har har Eto kalmado na ko kaya kudos to you ms. sara…galing!

  10. hanah6181 says:

    Hayyyyyyyyyy. salamat at dream lang pala. As I was reading, nag eemote ako. Bakti, SC, bakit? Now, waiting for the romatic version.🙂

  11. Christine says:

    Dun pa lang sa “I will have you one way or another!” kinabahan na ako tapos biglang dream lang pala?? Pati ako naloka na dream lang pala hahaha! Sooooo excited for romantic version

  12. gianni says:

    ay ano ba yan!!! buti na lang dream pala…kaloka…pwede ba yung alang pilitan hhihi…:D

  13. at first, ang sakit sa ulo. sabi ko parang ang hirap i visualize ni SC in sobrang angry mode.
    after the scene, commotion follows. naawa naman ako kay Maya. pero ang last…..

    nawala ang hinhin mode ko. napahalakhak mo ako. kung ako kay maya, hiwalay kung hiwalay basta yun ang effect ha. hihihih! youi never failed to made my day Ms Sara.

  14. charmtaz24 says:

    KAWINDANG!!! SC! Break na tayo!😉

    Sara, ibang level nanaman to! YOU ALREADY!

    if that happens, reverse pikot yan! hehehehe

  15. Cesheart says:

    Alam mo ikaw…..ang lakas talaga ng tama mo!!!!! luka luka ka talaga…..matapos mo akong paiyakin sa kabila eh panerbyosin mo naman ako dito…..talagang versatile ka na….from naughty…naging pang love story…ngayon type mo pang maging pang thriller…..kakaiba ka talaga!!!! kaya labs na labs kita! Galing mo sis! Salamat ulit!!!! hintay ko yung pambawi mong romantic ha…..parang ngayon palang kinikilg na ako…aiyiiieee!

  16. Honeydew says:

    Gusto ko yong TOTOO,,,lol=)) ayoko ng panaginip, parang awa mo na SARA! Hahahahahah….OhMyChief, kinababaliwan ako sa ‘yo! LOL:)) ….

  17. Honeydew says:

    Kinakabahan ako sa yo ser chief..lol

  18. Alpha says:

    Ayyy ang dami nang comments! Ibig sabihin late na pagbasa ko. Pro why is it that i felt a’little’ disappointed that it was only a dream? Sguro dhil inis at affected p tlga ako sa teaser; na paulit-ulit ko nmang pinapanood. While reading it, i was already thinking kung isusuplong b ni Maya si SC or will she b a silent victim. Well, sige, ok n rin that u made it Maya’s dream in the end. Hehe. Yes, i welcome a drunk-romantic-full of surprises SerChief.

  19. chobangs says:

    I was like…

    *gasp!

    then…
    😥

    why SC?

    then then ending…

    damn it!! hahahahaha…

    bopbopbop
    kala ko may drama na rin dito!

    I fell Prof

  20. chobangs says:

    at first I was like

    *gasp!

    then…
    😥

    then the ending..

    damn it!! hahahaha…kala ko may drama na rin dito! I fell Prof!! pwede nato sa libre…:D

  21. gianni says:

    ala pa bang kasunod??? pudpod na daliri ko ka rerefresh..gusto ko yung punong puno ng aksyon ng kahinhinan hahaha😀

    ataters lang po😀

  22. prettysides says:

    Pumapak na pak talaga itong storya na ito!!!🙂
    AYLABIT!!!

    hihhihi….

  23. kuriring01 says:

    iba ka talaga magsulat ms.sara parang may monitor sa utak ko kitang kita ko mga eksena…at yung spacing between the rape scene and when she woke up grabe kabang naramdaman ko…..nacu curious na talaga ko sau ms.sara pde bng magtayo na ng fans club…saralicious pde na bang name ng club hihihi

  24. piaseohyun says:

    Phewwwwwwwww dream lang pala kaloka hahaha
    Feel na feel ko kahit dream lang sya😀
    Sge abangers din ako sa susunod na mga ganap
    Thanks sis🙂

  25. SweetLemon says:

    Aaray ko! Hindi ko ma-imagine si Sir Chief in an ultra violent rape mode….My inner monitor is flashing a different scene… sexy and hot pounding romance with SC in violent mind-blowing caveman sex… Hahahaha!!!! — ay mali, Hihihihi pala, mahinhin din ako eh…😉

  26. Ricci says:

    Kaloka ! Galing mo mambitin. Feels real. Hahaha. Kelangan ng pambawi – Yong hindi na dream. Totohanan na! Woohoo!

  27. Nina says:

    Oh My God! Late nanaman ako!! but better late than never!!

    I don’t know what to say haha.. Makapag Jack and Coke nga din! Lagot sakin si Sir Chief! Wag sya magkakamali bumaba ng stage sa SG show! Hindi pwet ang tatapikin ko!! Yunnn basta!

    Yun romantic ang hihintayin ko! I love you Madam Sara! kahit inaantok ako sa gamot na ininom ko nabuhay mga dugo at nerves ko! Pano na ito ngayon haha iPU na yan!😛

  28. precious says:

    waiting for the romantic version of broken… ^__^

  29. Akawntant says:

    For a while naloka ako hahaha…well just the same naloka parin ako…so happy ot have found this site buti may nagbanggit sa kbu:)). This is the site for the frustrated follower of the show… when the super controlled bitin episodes is more than we could take…this is a place to go…a place where one could freely vent those pent up emotions…hahay…kaloka in a nice way hahaha…love it.. go all the way writers:))

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